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30 review for The Coffin Hotel: An Urban Fantasy Adventure

  1. 5 out of 5

    Ian

    Good, but doesn't always make sense It's a solid fun read. I do think there's be some real benefit to taking a little bit more time to each event or character it all felt a little rushed. And the main character really needs to be smarter in fights, the action chapters felt really weird because the main character was a giant idiot but strong enough that it was fine despite just starting? I just think more time needs to be taken in general to make sure that Action A should have consequence B both w Good, but doesn't always make sense It's a solid fun read. I do think there's be some real benefit to taking a little bit more time to each event or character it all felt a little rushed. And the main character really needs to be smarter in fights, the action chapters felt really weird because the main character was a giant idiot but strong enough that it was fine despite just starting? I just think more time needs to be taken in general to make sure that Action A should have consequence B both with character interaction and fights a lot of it didn't quite make sense and then everything just worked out for the MC. Even with magic and inherent craziness there needs to be internal consistency. With a bit more work it could be a great series though and even in current form it was a fun read.

  2. 4 out of 5

    Jeff

    A fun read! Pick it up!! The writing is good, but not at the level of a 5 star. The MC and characters are written well. The only thing that got to me was the the main girl is written in a way that I was 90% sure she was either gonna die, get kidnapped, or turn bad by the end of the book. They don’t, which is good, as I don’t read this genre for the drama. But I was nervous every time the main girl would be hyped up and then just tease the MC, as it really kinda made me think it was hyping her up A fun read! Pick it up!! The writing is good, but not at the level of a 5 star. The MC and characters are written well. The only thing that got to me was the the main girl is written in a way that I was 90% sure she was either gonna die, get kidnapped, or turn bad by the end of the book. They don’t, which is good, as I don’t read this genre for the drama. But I was nervous every time the main girl would be hyped up and then just tease the MC, as it really kinda made me think it was hyping her up just to turn those emotions against the reader. But good news!! No betrayal! Grab this book!!

  3. 5 out of 5

    Chance

    Smash grab but with heart The story fills to similar to a freemium type ergo with the content to keep you hooked but not truly elaborate plotlines to great a vivid story instead we’re given the base minimum of a backstory for the world with no truly original idea for the MC getting all the happy go-lucky moments expect he died and horny girls pop like weeds every where. An the most annoying thing was when finally get a real neat idea for villain you give the stupid reason for evil plan that nearl Smash grab but with heart The story fills to similar to a freemium type ergo with the content to keep you hooked but not truly elaborate plotlines to great a vivid story instead we’re given the base minimum of a backstory for the world with no truly original idea for the MC getting all the happy go-lucky moments expect he died and horny girls pop like weeds every where. An the most annoying thing was when finally get a real neat idea for villain you give the stupid reason for evil plan that nearly rage quiet the story but I worked threw every thing to express my displeasure.

  4. 4 out of 5

    Katherine Beale

    Funny, Sexy, Easy Read This book had me laughing out loud. It doesn't take itself seriously and is a great casual read. If I'm nitpicking, I'd say some of the word choices can be a little repetitive and some (not all) of the characters a little one dimensional. But it didn't stop me from enjoying the book for what it is; a sexy, action packed story full of laughs and silliness. I would recommend to anyone looking for some light hearted paranormal/fantasy with plenty of sass and cleavage. Funny, Sexy, Easy Read This book had me laughing out loud. It doesn't take itself seriously and is a great casual read. If I'm nitpicking, I'd say some of the word choices can be a little repetitive and some (not all) of the characters a little one dimensional. But it didn't stop me from enjoying the book for what it is; a sexy, action packed story full of laughs and silliness. I would recommend to anyone looking for some light hearted paranormal/fantasy with plenty of sass and cleavage.

  5. 5 out of 5

    alan

    I wanted to like it but... I really shouldn't have tried this book as I don't like it when people let their own viewpoints of the real.world stray into their books... With the first Karen remark I was like ahhh here we go.. Wokeness time... I kept on reading though.. I kept on getting lost on the words and sentence structure.. I ended up giving up two thirds into the book.. Its a shame because the premise is pretty cool.. But the book just didn't grab me I wanted to like it but... I really shouldn't have tried this book as I don't like it when people let their own viewpoints of the real.world stray into their books... With the first Karen remark I was like ahhh here we go.. Wokeness time... I kept on reading though.. I kept on getting lost on the words and sentence structure.. I ended up giving up two thirds into the book.. Its a shame because the premise is pretty cool.. But the book just didn't grab me

  6. 4 out of 5

    Paul Hefka

    A great read. Oh, man. I really enjoyed reading this book. This story has the possibility to become a great series. The story and characters were interesting and engaging. Once I started reading I didn't want to stop. There was plenty of action and humor. I'm looking forward to reading more about these characters and their further adventures. This book is definitely worth reading. A great read. Oh, man. I really enjoyed reading this book. This story has the possibility to become a great series. The story and characters were interesting and engaging. Once I started reading I didn't want to stop. There was plenty of action and humor. I'm looking forward to reading more about these characters and their further adventures. This book is definitely worth reading.

  7. 4 out of 5

    Dennis Heizelman

    Interesting read Also a good read. I enjoyed the story and the characters. Different take on the supernatural than I have read before. Some common elements but a slightly different focus, a building and the surrounding area of world. I do plan go read the next one, want to see what happens to the characters.

  8. 5 out of 5

    Aaron Henley

    A fun new series Hotel Transylvania for adults and it’s a wild ride. Lots of jokes and references with plenty of steamy times. Halloween has never been hotter. Characters are fun. There’s not much of an ongoing plot as this is more an adventure of the day story but I heave a feeling there will be as the story goes on.

  9. 4 out of 5

    Steve

    3.5 stars. It took the MC a long time to evolve from a snarky douchebag, a delay that almost made me drop this. He eventually got less snarky, but his inability to keep from ogling and pestering his co-worker for sex even when there is work to be done was annoying. Other than that, pretty typical and there was enough action to make it about something other than the MC's libido. 3.5 stars. It took the MC a long time to evolve from a snarky douchebag, a delay that almost made me drop this. He eventually got less snarky, but his inability to keep from ogling and pestering his co-worker for sex even when there is work to be done was annoying. Other than that, pretty typical and there was enough action to make it about something other than the MC's libido.

  10. 5 out of 5

    Roberto Flores

    So this is a simple, fun book. A burrito loving slacker finds redemption with hot undead women. That's it. This is a niche book, a very good niche book. The ending was a bit cheap, but all in all, a good book. So this is a simple, fun book. A burrito loving slacker finds redemption with hot undead women. That's it. This is a niche book, a very good niche book. The ending was a bit cheap, but all in all, a good book.

  11. 4 out of 5

    Tracy S McCoy

    Excellent start to all new series!!! A truly beyond enjoyable adult fantasy!!! Excellent non fade to black adult fantasy activities!!! Wonderful world building, powerful fun characters and first rate interactions!!!

  12. 5 out of 5

    Pete

    A fun start I wasn't really sure what to expect, but I'd describe this almost slice of life. Its mainly about the MC learning there's more to life than being a hermit. It just took him dying to learn A fun start I wasn't really sure what to expect, but I'd describe this almost slice of life. Its mainly about the MC learning there's more to life than being a hermit. It just took him dying to learn

  13. 5 out of 5

    S.J.Hull

    This is a book full of great characters and fun. the humour is dry and tongue in cheek. The concept is a little different and intreaging and I can't wait to find out more about Lydia and Vanessa. Come on book two. This is a book full of great characters and fun. the humour is dry and tongue in cheek. The concept is a little different and intreaging and I can't wait to find out more about Lydia and Vanessa. Come on book two.

  14. 5 out of 5

    Matthew Domenic

    Good for a first book Interesting concept you went with and otherwise it was a good read but your MC was mostly a blank slate, I know you tried to subvert it by painting him as a loner, but at times it made him kinda of empty

  15. 5 out of 5

    Kent Herring

    Good Book I liked it anyway, I hope you do as well. I really hope to see this become a great series.

  16. 5 out of 5

    Nick Massey

    Fun fun fun I really enjoyed this book. It's one of the most entertaining reads I have had in a very long time, more please! Fun fun fun I really enjoyed this book. It's one of the most entertaining reads I have had in a very long time, more please!

  17. 4 out of 5

    Michelle v

    Interesting Reads more like a SIM game than a book. Their is lots of sex and fighting. Full of weird characters and monsters.

  18. 4 out of 5

    Michael Burnett

    Great book Great book I can't wait to read the next book in the series I would recommend this author to anyone Great book Great book I can't wait to read the next book in the series I would recommend this author to anyone

  19. 4 out of 5

    James Riley

    A fun read This book was a lot of fun. Fun characters, lots of action, and a !it of humor. What's not to like? A fun read This book was a lot of fun. Fun characters, lots of action, and a !it of humor. What's not to like?

  20. 5 out of 5

    David Anderson

    Good Very good. Well written. Great action. Characters are likible. Well presented. I liked it. Good read. Word word word word

  21. 5 out of 5

    Alan Regan

    Entertaining This is an easy light read that is entertaining. It you are looking for something to pass the time,this would be a great choice. .

  22. 5 out of 5

    Zack Turner

    Excellent Fantastic read! I absolutely loved it! I can not wait for the next one to be release! Such great characters in this book!

  23. 4 out of 5

    Tj Mueller

  24. 5 out of 5

    Jamie

  25. 5 out of 5

    Jeremy Elijah Lovick

  26. 4 out of 5

    Max Reyes

  27. 5 out of 5

    Julie Lunsford

  28. 5 out of 5

    Jordan Harrold

  29. 5 out of 5

    Mark Coe

  30. 5 out of 5

    Brian Stivers

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